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   작성자   alex64    등록일   2021-08-03
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At Tokyo Olympic 2021 Shin Yubin and Han Ying had a match and Shin Yubin won so they had a hand shake People sead that Shin Yubin has a great manner.

CORRECTION:

At Tokyo Olympic 2021, Shin Yubin and Han Ying had a math. Shin Yubin won and they did a hand shake. People said that Shin Yubin has a good manner.

COMMENT:
 Please be careful with the verb. But you did a good job for making sentences. Keep it up, Alex!

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